As I say elsewhere...
6sixty9nine
My man!
Can we please see more of your work!!??
The bit where you ask us to imagine being married to a girl who coughs her guts up every mornin...
The bit where you've no idea of her fucken name and it doesn't matter does it?
And hitching to a punt because your car's in for a fix?
This, fellow punters, is storytelling.
Bravo!