Thanks Hurricanes for your constructive feedback.
I'll make you an offer. You can pay $100 to me tomorrow to sit in the room at 45 Granville with me whilst I fuck their new girl, busty Coco who I met today so long as you promise to be a good boy and keep quiet.
If you are a very, very good boy you can even lick and swallow my cum off her body at the end instead of me eating it. I am feeling generous.
After that you can sit in the naughty corner and I will give you some English and spelling lessons to improve your grammar.