Lol, brutal. Keep 'em coming.

Yeah, I've been guilty of including 'she cums' in ARs - but I'm self aware enough to generally add 'or at least pretended to' , or add a line about being aware its all a fantasy / illusion, but presenting the appearance of what's happening for narrative effect. No one wants to read an AR with such truths as 'I fucked her hard, she pretended to enjoy it while wondering how long she should wait to fake an orgasm so I'd finish.'

Pretty funny to hear it from the other side though.