Take 5 - After Report

[VFlowers]

Hello Mr Ancient Roman Dress,
Apologies for my verboseness
Hint #1 - I Posted my review in the Take 5 After Report thread
Implying I had been to Take 5 after a session
Hint #2 - “ First will be the shop i have not been to. Take 5.”
Implying that i had been to the shops Korean Lily and Sweet Candy had worked at before.
I do apologise for incorrect punctuation. I should have used a full colon, instead of a full stop.

Silly of me

My first brisbane stop this tour was at Take 5.
My review was after I had been to see Miss Lily, flower of wonder

Hint#3 - “ A thai summer flowering bulbs with showy blooms, heavily fragrant.”
The veritable dictionary definition of a Lily, with Thai at the front.

My reviews are not for everyone. When i do them
Now I am back in sunny old Sydney town, they will be few and far apart.
I will return
Maybe to see Lily at 5 Star or Candy at Time
As were recommended to me by the fine citizens of this wonderful city.

If my quest of 50 different girls at 50 shops is however to continue, I may look elsewhere

Farewell my Roman colleague. May you run into the sweetest Lily brisbane has to offer.

Your use of future instead of past tense might have confused some, although it was clear from the overall context that you had been to T5 already.
Literacy is on the decline in the so called 'western world'...