A long AR but did not allow me to get any idea about Julie quickly : how old, if pretty and busty, skin quality etc.? This is what punters want to know. People read ARs because they want to know if they should try the girl later. Without a clear description, the desire to read on is reduced. This is my opinion only.
Details might be inside the main AR, but too lazy to read content due lack of time and patience. Sorry to make such comments even though lots of efforts put into writing AR.
How this bro fucked the girl is not no interest to readers? People have different fucking abilities, girls and customers mix another important factor. What this brother got might not be the same services offered to the next customer. I will read on only if the girl's descriptions fit my selection criteria, but will go to next AR if no good description (as long as it is not an advertisement by the shop) is provided therein.