need feedback!! help~❤️

[andsands]

Hi Christmas,

Your mock-up picture of customers redeeming their vouchers was hilarious. Best moment of the day.

Thanks for the laughs.

[Christmas]

thank you all!!! here take my coupons

so,
1. changed font and font size, It may easier to read now?? I wish...

2. I'm putting girls name on their picture. looking for a way to link other pictures and reviews...
well.. there must be some way but I don't know.
need to try every options I have...
3. the reason why I didn't put roster for whole week, is,

if you see Romi's name on Monday, Wednesday and Friday. and it's Wednesday. so you probably come see her on Friday? because you're not that horny today.
if it's unsure she's working on Friday, you might come today? even though you're that horny but still, otherwise you may need to wait until next week???
do you guys understand what I'm talking about?? ㅋㅋㅋEnglish gone bad...
so it's psychological .... marketing... strategy

please someone explain this -.-

[phoenix555]

I only check this from phone (iOS Chrome)

1. Some girl photo is cropped (half height), while other girl is full height photo
For example, Ayu photo.
Let me know if you need screenshot,PM me and I will send you one via snapchat

2. Girls section should have name on each photo.

3. Daily roster is good enough, better if you can publish roster for day after (maybe on night time), so people can book ahead on day before.

The rest looks good.

[G$$]

yeah, I dont think the full weeks roster is necessary, just the current day. The next days roster is good also and nothing more than that really.

[Christmas]

did it
-put girls name on their pictures
-link review to their pictures
-fonts

will do it
-roster maybe 2-3 days together

[down2fish]

Thanks a lot oppas! a Work in progress.... I better change fonts since it's not really easy to read.
and the girls section..... a work in progress...
here "how to redeem coupon"





❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ SAN Q ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
no expire date! (until I get sacked)

Yay, no expiry date! Hopefully I can use it soon though.
Funny you decided to use an old caucasian guy for me. I'm the complete opposite, young Asian guy haha.

[Christmas]

[God Member]

thank you all!!! here take my coupons

Too funny!

[phoenix555]

Too funny!

Christmas, where do you find all these gif?

[corvus]

Jerry try to link the reviews with the profile for easy access to reviews.

[phoenix555]

I think the navigation will work better using button or link, it's only 5 button/link side by side needed.
Home roster girls rates contact

Using drop down is a hassle to navigate, especially on phone.

[Nejums]

Change the Racing Sans One font from the shop name please. It is not suitable. You may as well use Comic Sans or Curlz...Also, increase the size. The store name needs to be more prominent.

In terms of layout and colouring, I can't really fault those. I see you're going for a minimalist look, which is great. Less clutter is always better. My suggestion would be to adjust photos to be consistent in sizing. This will help make the website flow better. Shouldn't be hard to do.

Edit: Viewed on Chrome with Windows 10.

[Nejums]

Sorry had to take down the voucher image.

[Christmas]

Christmas, where do you find all these gif?

It's all from google or giphy.com

Jerry try to link the reviews with the profile for easy access to reviews.

ehh.. sorry... I don't understand. if you click on girl's picture, it directly goes to reviews. where's profile?? sorry My English is far from perfect

Using drop down is a hassle to navigate, especially on phone.

I'll look for more options.. if there's anything I can do with mobile version!!!

[Christmas]

Change the Racing Sans One font from the shop name please. It is not suitable. You may as well use Comic Sans or Curlz...Also, increase the size. The store name needs to be more prominent.

In terms of layout and colouring, I can't really fault those. I see you're going for a minimalist look, which is great. Less clutter is always better. My suggestion would be to adjust photos to be consistent in sizing. This will help make the website flow better. Shouldn't be hard to do.

Edit: Viewed on Chrome with Windows 10.

it's ok with PC if i increase the size.

but it fucks mobile version

so I shorten shop's name

so it looks OK with mobile too


and also N5M sounds like icecream shop not brothel. so you can have a look in public ㅋㅋㅋ(i wish)

[Christmas]

Sorry had to take down the voucher image.

hey! why! that was so soooo sooooooo pretty voucher!!! it was like morning-glory (you know the korean stationary shop) look-alike coupon design I liked it!
did you use indesign for it?? hehe but I don't mind if you had to take down... thank you nejums anyway! ❤️❤️❤️

[Nejums]

Hahaha I like the idea or changing it to something more discreet, but perhaps the pictures won't save the person viewing the website in public…

In terms of the font you've changed it to, it's better, but I don't know if you'd want to do a logo style or just have simple text for the shop name?

[Nejums]

hey! why! that was so soooo sooooooo pretty voucher!!! it was like morning-glory (you know the korean stationary shop) look-alike coupon design I liked it!
did you use indesign for it?? hehe but I don't mind if you had to take down... thank you nejums anyway! ❤️❤️❤️

I use Photoshop. I'll make you another one, I promise.

[phoenix555]

Are you using media query CSS? You can define different size of font size between desktop and mobile version.

This page explained it in a simpler way:
https://varvy.com/mobile/legible-font-size.html

[Christmas]

I don't mind any, but something very simple and simple
square space gave me some free logo design options, such as





guess I'll stick to text ㅋㅋㅋ