Classic Poetry for your "Interest & Pleasure" back by popular demand - 14.3% of vote.

[greybeard_]

I suggested before that you write about something that you are passionate about Captain Poo.

So ... perhaps you should write a poem about your passionate love of cute male transexuals???

Think to yourself - what is it about cute male transexuals that really gets your dick hard Captain Poo? What would you like to do a cute male transexual if you had the opportunity? what would you ask a cute male transexual to do to you?

Don't hold back Captain Poo - channel all that frustrated homosexual lust that you've had pent up for long, visualise all of those long masterbatory sessions in which you fantasised about cute male transexual cock, be inspired and put your pen to paper!!

This is your moment to shine Captain Poo - this poem will be your Opus, this will be how your are remembered!

[SmilingGiraffe]

I suggested before that you write about something that you are passionate about Captain Poo.

So ... perhaps you should write a poem about your passionate love of cute male transexuals???

Think to yourself - what is it about cute male transexuals that really gets your dick hard Captain Poo? What would you like to do a cute male transexual if you had the opportunity? what would you ask a cute male transexual to do to you?

Don't hold back Captain Poo - channel all that frustrated homosexual lust that you've had pent up for long, visualise all of those long masterbatory sessions in which you fantasised about cute male transexual cock, be inspired and put your pen to paper!!

This is your moment to shine Captain Poo - this poem will be your Opus, this will be how your are remembered!

You seem to be infatuated with me, how interesting.....are you a good looking ladyboy?
Some ladyboys are more feminine than females these days. If you are, I might be interested.
But I don't think you are, unfortunately.
Never mind, please continue to be infatuated with me, you're not the first. (ps. notice *you're*)
We poets don't mind a little infatuation.

[SmilingGiraffe]

I'm still waiting for your considered critique Licker, be a good fellow.

Licker, I know you have a reasonable mind, be a dear and do your thing in terms of a poetic critique.

[wilisno]

Wilisno, you are conspicuous by your absence, be a good chap and make a considered critique of my poem.
I'm interested in your opinion, truly.

What poem ??? Have you written a poem ? Please don't insult the poets abd poetry !

[SmilingGiraffe]

What poem ??? Have you written a poem ? Please don't insult the poets abd poetry !

We all look forward to you showing us what you can do Wilisno.....we'll be waiting for a while I think.

[wilisno]

We all look forward to you showing us what you can do Wilisno.....we'll be waiting for a while I think.

Who's " we " ?

I'm sure a lot of people will be offended to be called your peers ! You don't represent them !

I'm not known for writing poems, because this is not a site for writing poem, this is a site for writing sexual experience if you haven't noticed !

[CunningLinguist]

There's nothing inherently wrong with rhyming poetry if its done well. You don't do it well. Your reliance on paired rhymes and its forced meter makes your poetry sound childish and unpleasant to read. My advice - experiement with free verse and see how that turns out. Also, you have a sterile and uninteresting personality so perhaps try to find your creative inspiration from the outside world rather than from within your own mind.

I never bothered to read the poem, but this critique seems pretty good, and confirms my initial decision to skip the poem ...

[SmilingGiraffe]

Who's " we " ?

I'm sure a lot of people will be offended to be called your peers ! You don't represent them !

I'm not known for writing poems, because this is not a site for writing poem, this is a site for writing sexual experience if you haven't noticed !

Human beings are complex creatures, with various different aspects impacting on their human condition and sexual experience.
If we explore what we feel and how we think, we can heighten our wareness and appreciation of all things, including the sexual experience.
The mind is so important for experience. We are thinking, social beings, we are not simply units of consumption and production.

[wilisno]

Human beings are complex creatures, with various different aspects impacting on their human condition and sexual experience.
If we explore what we feel and how we think, we can heighten our wareness and appreciation of all things, including the sexual experience.
The mind is so important for experience. We are thinking, social beings, we are not simply units of consumption and production.

Feel free to explore what you want, but if you try to impose your childish will on others, that's what makes you the most ridiculed person on the forum !

[SmilingGiraffe]

I never bothered to read the poem, but this critique seems pretty good, and confirms my initial decision to skip the poem ...

You didn't read the poem, but someone else's critique is pretty good, .........that's an interesting commentary.
Good of you to come along anyway, I know it's hard to stay away from the light.

[SmilingGiraffe]

Feel free to explore what you want, but if you try to impose your childish will on others, that's what makes you the most ridiculed person on the forum !

You are somewhat prone to exaggeration wilisno, but at least you now say I'm free to explore what I want, so I think we are making progress.
My perspective is simple; there are humans and there are animals. Humans are complex, varied, thinking creatures, whereas animals are
simplistic, more uniform in behaviour, and instinctive. It is better not to confuse one with the other, I think. I don't seek to impose, only to discuss.

[AHLUNGOR]

A Chinese Poem any one ??

[wilisno]

You are somewhat prone to exaggeration wilisno, but at least you now say I'm free to explore what I want, so I think we are making progress.
My perspective is simple; there are humans and there are animals. Humans are complex, varied, thinking creatures, whereas animals are
simplistic, more uniform in behaviour, and instinctive. It is better not to confuse one with the other, I think. I don't seek to impose, only to discuss.

Yes, there are human and there are animals on this forum, like the fake lion, Monkey, Toad and Girraffe. And yes, do not confuse one with the other, and use the pronoun " we " to represent them !

[AHLUNGOR]

A Chinese Poem any one ??

二十四橋明月夜
玉人何處教吹簫

24 bridges under the Moonlight.
Where is Lady Jade teaching the blowjob ?

[SmilingGiraffe]

A Chinese Poem any one ??

Good idea AL.....you give us a couple of verses of famous Chinese poem translated to English.
Then maybe I can do a critique, for a change.

[SmilingGiraffe]

Hi there Mr Crash and Burn, the subject poem kicks off this thread, please take your time to make a considered review.

cheers......

[Mr Crash and Burn]

Very good poem.

Deep within it lies a broken punter or L, either waiting for their next good punt or their next good customer.

[SmilingGiraffe]

Very good poem.

Deep within it lies a broken punter or L, either waiting for their next good punt or their next good customer.

You have impeccable taste, thanks so much dear fellow.

Your insights are not without some foundation. But, I do have a highly multi-faceted personality,
so, at times, I can be a little uncertain of the miniscule detail of my particular perspective.
But, if I'm ever uncertain, it is only on a very limited number of occasions, and only a little bit. (I think).

Well that's my story and I'm sticking with it....haha. Thanks again for your very kind review.

[SmilingGiraffe]

Is the interest and demand for fine poetry beginning to grow? Could be!

[Sextus]

Is the interest and demand for fine poetry beginning to grow?

Yes, so when are we going to get it?